Compete

I never had to compete
Against closed doors and mirrors
Once you had my heart in tow
I could see you more clearer

Nightmares flood my naked mind
Down in the hole sides like glass
Reflecting her face not mine
Her narcissistic ways crashed

© 2012 Michael Yost 4/24

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8 responses to “Compete

  1. HI Michael
    this is an intruiging poem, is the “you” in the first stanza the same as the “her” in the second?

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  2. Good work! At first I was thinking it a little love poem, but now it’s just plain good!

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  3. “Once you had my heart in tow,” great line, Michael. Loved it! Amy
    http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/04/27/wonder-wander/

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  4. Great last stanza!! 😀

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