Trifecta’s Writing Challenge Mar 25

For http://www.Trifectawritingchallenge.com prompt this week, we are giving you the first 33 words of a story. You need to complete it with 33 of your own words.  This weekend’s Trifextra is community-judged.

“There’s nothing cute about it,” he said. The register of his voice indicated decision more so than discussion. She disagreed heartily and privately, staring past his head and out the window behind him.

Townspeople had a contest of prominent people’s baby pictures in the newspaper for a Nursery fund raiser. His mother submitted his photo of him naked lying on his stomach.  John won belly down.

http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/

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37 responses to “Trifecta’s Writing Challenge Mar 25

  1. Hah! That’ll show him!

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  2. belly down – 🙂 love this, Michael

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  3. At least he was belly down, haha! This is great. 😉

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  4. So funny! That should prevent him from having any airs. Oopss, no pun intended.

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  5. Nice take on the prompt!

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  6. “Belly down” — great word choices, and great idea!

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  7. Of all the responses I’ve read so far, this is the best yet!

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  8. Yay!! Revenge of the moms. 🙂

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  9. Definitely cute, from a mom’s point of view!

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  10. Cute.

    Or rather. Maybe not, depending on who is looking at it.

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  11. Hahaha!!! I like where you took this!

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  12. Great piece! I love when the author is able to get a beginning, middle, end out of so few words. Well played!

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  13. Of course a mother thinks that’s cute….boy do I have some pictures of my sons waiting for just the right time… 😆 (only kidding)

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  14. Very funny. And really, why not. Take him down a peg. Sweet.

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  15. Thanks so much for linking up to Trifextra. Remember, this weekend’s entries are being judged by the Trifecta community, so I hope you were able to cast your votes. Winners will be announced with the Monday post. Hope to see you back then.

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  16. Very funny! Hope he was just a wee bit embarrassed!

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