Stoop

The stoop was starting to feel lonely waiting. We were both called in for supper at the same time. It was her sister’s turn to do the dishes. Did she forget our date?

© 2012 Michael Yost 1/27

The first weekend prompt is as follows: write a love story in 33 words.  You are free to interpret that prompt however you wish, but your response must be 33 words exactly.

Read more: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/

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30 responses to “Stoop

  1. I love the anxiety you create here.

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  2. Sounds like puppy love!

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  3. Aww…I agree with Sam. totally sounds like puppy love. Young love is so tough!

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  4. awww unrequited love. 😦

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  5. Unrequited love is the worst. 😦

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  6. sweet! Young love 🙂

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  7. Haven’t we all loved someone who didn’t know we existed? It’s torturous. Bless. X

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  8. Ahhh, young love. Always so neurotic and worrisome. Well captured.
    Came from the Trifextra link.

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  9. Sweet in a melancholy kind of a way. Well played!

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  10. Reminds me of high school…young love…waiting for something to happen! Over from Trifextra

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  11. that was cool, you left a lot to the imagination and said so much as well 🙂 well done!

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  12. Young love? Hopefully this wasn’t a sad memory.

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  13. So much expectation and the waiting is the hardest part it seems! Came over from trifecta I love what you did with this prompt!

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  14. You cut right through all those years and laid adolescence at my feet. Nicely done.

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  15. Thanks for joining up for our first Trifextra challenge. You’ve done a great job giving us a familiar look back at the difficulty of those first loves that go unreciprocated. Nicely done. Come back Monday for the new prompt!

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