Haiku 13

Sand covered my face
Tumbling on the white warm beach
Clowning as I rolled

© 2011 Michael Yost

http://purpletreehouse.blogspot.com/2011/07/poetic-forms-classic-haiku.html

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20 responses to “Haiku 13

  1. vivid imagery, wow.

    Glad to see you write one and share.

    have a fun holiday.

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  2. booguloo,
    Thanks for your no. of visits lately. Great haiku!

    Hank

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  3. Sounds like so much fun…great haiku

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  4. Very sweet! I like this.

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  5. Clowning as I rolled! Haha. Nice one there Michael!

    Merry Christmas!

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  6. sand has huge impact when they cover your face and have to roll.

    simply love the vivid imagery your words strike.

    🙂

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  7. Lovely Michael!!!! peace, love, joy and many blessings in the new year, Terri

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  8. I love this… but the last line is my favorite!

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  9. the imagery is vivid and powerful.

    🙂

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