Our Glass of Sand (revised)

Pushing on past time and space
Touched by fire with her radiant embrace
Chest to breast, hearts synced in a race
Never ever wanting, to leave this place

Scent of her hair ear, lobe cool to the touch
Loins rushing red, our lips about to brush
Breathe quickened now, soon to combust
These feelings must not only, be given to lust

Fingers running down, her arms to her hands
Our eyes locked in smile, lingering in stand
We were almost part of something banned
As time stood still for a moment, in our glass of sand

 

©2011 Michael Yost

http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/

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41 responses to “Our Glass of Sand (revised)

  1. Lovely. 🙂

    I have vague memories of those times.

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  2. what a feeling!!! yum yum, I am feeling hmmmm nice after reading this one 🙂 I want that feeling bottled up somewhere in my house lol
    happy rally Boo and thanks for the visit!! xxx

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  3. Great!
    love the rhyme & rhythm in this,
    and…the idea! made me move.
    what a love scene, and well put together.

    good job. loved reading this.

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  4. Why is it when you get to be our age, the memories are so vague? I like this, Michael.

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  5. lots of different sensations in this poem

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  6. I liked the image of the time standing still in the moment …. so well put 🙂

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  7. Cool! I liked the “our glass of sand” a lot!! Nice one Michael. blessings, Terri

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  8. I enjoy the topic. But what I most enjoyed was the rhyme scheme you employed. This is good poetry and the kind of craftsmanship I like.

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  9. Erotic, with a tinge of wistfulness. Nicely written.

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  10. I love it … full of texture and sensations! Nicely done!!

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  11. wow. Thats very sweet. you have a way with words 🙂

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  12. sensual and captivating write, the last line sings! Wonderful write ~ Rose

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  13. Love the last line! Super!

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  14. witty and powerful.

    Glad to see you in.
    smiles.

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  15. Happy rally! What a nice poem, so full of power.

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  16. oh wow! i could imaging skin and mouths and the flicking and whipping of long hair! awesome read Michael!!!! LOVE this one!

    http://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.com/2011/12/15/on-the-dock-where-summer-lied/

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  17. The powerful pull of lusty love,
    When young is so much bolder,
    Than love on a higher plane,
    That’s in your head when older.

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  18. Love caught in the snapshot of a poem! Well done!

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  19. There are those moments in time worth revisiting.

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