Release

So many emotions to try and sort out
Those you’ve loved left you hanging in doubt
Refusing to hear you nor your lamented shouts
Leaving your thoughts within and your emotions without

© 2011 Michael Yost

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http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2011/08/poetry-potluck-week-48-passionate.html

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15 responses to “Release

  1. Ahhh! Good one! Right on the mark.

    Refusing to hear you nor your lamented shouts
    Leaving your thoughts within and your emotions without

    Excellent Mike

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  2. Sometimes there seems to be too much going on in one’s mind. When that happens to me, sometimes I just get out and take a walk with the dog to clear all the cobwebs!

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  3. yeah, sometimes those you want around aren’t there sadly enough 😦

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  4. wonderful and emotional

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  5. amazing, your interview is posted at Jingle Poetry Blog,

    check it out today.

    🙂

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  6. Another good one, Mike. Tears at the heart.

    Here’s another one I posted this week: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/i-am-loved/

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  7. Too sad and the sort of thing that happens too often.

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