Black Steam

Black steam rises as I begin to let go
Slowly measured so I don’t start to blow
Anger, envy and depression are about to crack
Red, green and blue mixed turn to black

Red because our relationship that I destroyed
Green over all their happiness they now enjoy
Blue for the girl I lost, that I used to cling
Black together putting on their new rings

© 2011 Michael Yost

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27 responses to “Black Steam

  1. Ouch! You wrote something within your heart and it showed. Great poem with tons of colorful meanings!

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  2. Excellent! Your use of colors VIVIDLY portrays emotion in this well-crafted poem.

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  3. sad loss,
    cheer up, you will smile again when you find another one.

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  4. The colors are wonderful. Strong imagery for strong feelings

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  5. This was powerful…I could feel the pain in every word.

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  6. Intense powerful poem!

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  7. Hello Michael.
    If we were perfect humans, we would never do a thing wrong in life and love.
    I feel your pain, but being the romantic optimist that I am, I say your turn will come again. I believe happiness in love belongs to all of us.

    Nicely done, my friend!

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  8. I can feel the emotions too. Your first line had the most important message–to let go–but not always so easy, I know. That pain sure can linger a while…

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  9. booguloo,

    Absolute honesty and not an easy situation to write about. You have shared your emotions very colourfully.

    Best Wishes, Eileen

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    • Thanks Eileen. Just another day in the life as a poet. smiles.. I think we both like writing about real things in people’s lives with some easy to understand verses that others can relate to.

      Best Wishes back to you,
      Michael

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  10. I love this. So much feeling and the rhyme was great. I am happy to have discovered your writing. Will check in regularly.

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  11. what a clolorful but sad poem… I can feel the desperation when I finished reading the last line about their new rings… 🙂

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  12. Sad poetry, but maybe the first line is the most hopeful.

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  13. i love the colored emotions!

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