Senryu Thirty Nine

Sobriety gives
Me the key to my own cell
And to escape hell

© 2011 Michael Yost

http://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.com/2011/07/29/free-write-friday-http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2011/07/poetry-potluck-week-46-love-and-its-not.htmladdiction/

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32 responses to “Senryu Thirty Nine

  1. Good choice to side with sobriety …

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  2. Very true words here.

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  3. Brilliant, short but so sweet this is genius, true words. I think this could be a powerful mantra. Brilliant work as usual mate

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  4. Absolutely. A clear mind is the greatest thought provoker of all.

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  5. Thank you, Michael. So much. ♥

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  6. Oh, this is excellent, both as commentary and as form. A perfect gem of wisdom. Thanks, Michael! Amy
    http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/07/29/yeah-like-thats-gonna-happen/

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  7. Loved it – simple and to the point and OH so honest!

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  8. Yes! Sobriety is not the dull thing it is often characterized as. It is sharp enough to pick the lock. Good job! 🙂

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  9. short to the point and its sailing outta left field…its a home run!!!!

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  10. Concise and to the point. Congrats!

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  11. im glad u chose sobriety…..goodluck in the future.. 🙂

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  12. Short and sweet… oh, so to the point.

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  13. way to go.

    you write stunning senryus.

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