Cut Loose

Posted on July 15, 2011 | 18 Comments

Your words make me strained and pained
Leaving me nothing to otherwise gain
As I would be better off in the cold freezing rain
Than standing here swallowing imagined blame

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18 responses to “Cut Loose”

belladonna23 | July 15, 2011 at 7:05 AM | Reply

i know the feeling..

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- booguloo | July 15, 2011 at 11:25 AM | Reply
  
  What we bring on ourselves is amazing sometimes.
  
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Broken Sparkles | July 15, 2011 at 12:24 PM | Reply

I like the rhymes …

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- booguloo | July 15, 2011 at 12:49 PM | Reply
  
  Thanks “B” !
  
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moondustwriter | July 15, 2011 at 6:10 PM | Reply

that one can really hurt – I think the thought that would or could or does happen …

you deal with it and resolve it well – I’ll take a bit of rain rather than heart drain

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- booguloo | July 15, 2011 at 7:16 PM | Reply
  
  I admit I do take it to extremes in my poetry. smiles…
  
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Sharp Little Pencil | July 15, 2011 at 9:31 PM | Reply

“Standing here swallowing imagined blame.” Killer line, Michael. Lots of impact in a minimum of words, very effective. Amy

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- booguloo | July 16, 2011 at 5:40 AM | Reply
  
  Thanks Amy. You know I like to compact the emotions as much as I can without losing the message.
  
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Fiducia | July 16, 2011 at 5:43 AM | Reply

A known feeling..well expressed through your poetic realms!!

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- booguloo | July 16, 2011 at 5:59 AM | Reply
  
  Thank You.
  
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Jo Bryant | July 17, 2011 at 11:07 PM | Reply

Cutting – but real. 🙂

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- booguloo | July 18, 2011 at 10:14 AM | Reply
  
  Thanks Jo I try.
  
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Dakshi | July 19, 2011 at 4:29 AM | Reply

i have felt this way too…

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- booguloo | July 19, 2011 at 7:54 AM | Reply
  
  I think we all do. Thanks for the comments and the visits.
  
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Jingle | July 19, 2011 at 7:50 AM | Reply

yeah!

right to the point.

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- booguloo | July 19, 2011 at 7:53 AM | Reply
  
  No sense in beating around the bush. smiles.
  
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Jamie Dedes | July 20, 2011 at 5:57 AM | Reply

You captured that feeling …. Nice! – the poem, not the feeling! 🙂

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- booguloo | July 20, 2011 at 6:14 AM | Reply
  
  People try and lay blame so as not to see their own workings in the mix. Had to write it.
  
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