Pity*

Pity is a selfish emotion.

Who does it help as it sways like the ocean?

We hang on to it like it’s going to help;

All it does is drag us to the bottom like getting caught in kelp.

 

© 2011 Michael Yost

*Changed from “Sympathy” to “Pity” based on caring feedback.

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5 responses to “Pity*

  1. Like it alot! Love when we get suggestions!

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  2. This is so true, whether it’s self pity or pity for others. Well poemed, Michael. Thank you!

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  3. Exactly–it’s just like being caught in kelp! Yikes!

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