Spin

Letting it sit there, on the road I go

I dare not go back, I must not go slow

No matter what the person, has to say

Knowing in my heart, that God has just paid

 

Going straight forward I have but to push

Because the next stop, could be an ambush

Not being paranoid, I just know my limits

If a tale could be told, I could spin it

 

© 2011 Michael Yost

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32 responses to “Spin

  1. Some interesting thoughts that I shall have to ponder further………

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  2. Very true words. We are all in a war, so must watch for ambush at all times. Highly thought provoking.
    The Lonely Recluse.

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  3. Not to go back is the right choice. We are all tempted to spin. Good words.

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  4. Interesting feeling and intriguing poem. I would have liked it to go on and be more developed though.

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  5. We can choose to move forward or turn back, be affected or not, gaurd our beliefs with vigilance or allow others to tread and wear us down. I really enjoyed the use of the word ambush. The brevity of the verses give a since of surprise. BUT… The duality of spin was the BIG winner with me.

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  6. This is an interesting one. Life does of ten feel this way …

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  7. love your word flow.
    what a delight to see you in.
    have fun.
    😉

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  8. I adore your honesty… if a tale could be told I could spin in… and the connection of reality, mortality, spirituality.

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  9. The wars we wage against ourselves are the worst, we really are own worst enemy. Very nicely done Booguloo

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  10. Interesting and wonderful..
    keep up the good work mike…

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  11. ‘If a tale could be told, I could spin it’… Bright and thought-provoking. Nice!

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  12. So true.
    Beautiful as always.

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  13. Very nice.

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  14. I am sure you could!

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  15. Ooh! Love this!
    Well done! I totally understand the feeling being expressed here!

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  16. that last line was my favorite. it makes me feel as if there would be a sequel. i want to hear the spinning of the tale! good work

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