Senryu Twenty Four

Lines white and fine
Tiny bridges to the shrine
Big head or dead line

© 2011 Michael Yost

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6 responses to “Senryu Twenty Four

  1. The second line functions nicely as passage for the initial white “lines” to the more prominent ones with that twist of wordplay at the end. Well penned Senryu.

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  2. ha, love that last line…nicely played senryu

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  3. Nice twist at the end 🙂

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