But I Feel Remorse

It’s ok, I feel remorseExecution
My sins are washed away
Come you have no recourse
Someone else gladly paid

Let loose the bonds binding
See how good you will feel
Visualize unwinding
Before the clock does peal

Hood is hot and itches
My breath makes me sick
How about last wishes
What were those last clicks..

© 2011 Michael Yost
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6 responses to “But I Feel Remorse

  1. I guess he’s getting “done”…

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  2. Oh fabulous. I have to admit, I read it entirely differently…only when I re-read the 2nd stanza did I finally get the claustrophobia of the hood.

    Very nice.

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  3. Ditto your last response to a comment.

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