Under my sky is under your feetSix foot under just out of my reachOnce in a while falls through a cat’s turdYou see it is food for our fat birds
© 2011 Michael YostOne Shoot Sunday 01/30/2011With Iquanyin Moon, Photographer
Ha! 2 reactions I had…. First, very nice flow in the beginning. Second, ewww… a giant litter box. lol Extremely creative, Michael. Cheers
Interesting poem…where did the cat turds come from!? Is this the universe telling me its time to change the litter?
This piece leaves me a bit disoriented…reminds me of a dream Carl Jung had as a boy…he wrote about it in “Myths,Symbols,and Dreams”…such disorientation usually triggers something remarkable later…i hope.
Let me know when it runs out of pen..
this is indeed a very unexpected take on the prompt – but a damn creative one!
i like the start a lot – under my skin is under your feet – really good michael
Lots of things get under my skin.. ..smiles..
ha. great rhyme…and killer opening line…guffawed at the use of turd…
I tried talking to the birds, but they eat that shit right up!
We have four cats….maybe I should gently place some of them on said litter box…just kidding.
What you don’t want to feed the birds?
O though the same; great flow then eeeeww cat poo, really? Ha!
The poo just fell naturally from the loo.
Great rhythm…I found it quite comical too!
Glad you enjoyed it!
Enjoyed the comical aspect, thrown in just to throw one… nice touch.
Gotta balance the bad, sad and fun.. Gratitude accepted and given.
Okay … and that’s my big laugh for tonight. Glad I’m not in charge of changing the litter.
It’s washing your car that could be a task.. ..smiles..
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