Kingdom Lost

The blaze filled the night time skyLoveforceNum5
Mountain fairies rescued the queen
Winds loft cinders of souls died
Lost hope growing as her scream

© 2011 Michael Yost

Jonas Gerard Art Gallery

Friday Poetically

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7 responses to “Kingdom Lost

  1. nice…you packed an epic into few lines…hope growing as her scream…wow….nicely done.

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  2. i like this…. your words are like a quick jab to the conscious… it leaves the reader mourning. Great job

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  3. A whole kingdom lost in four lines–and beautifully done too. You might be the master of short, Michael.

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  4. Mountain fairies rescued the queen…how cool is that?! love this michael – excellent take on the prompt – we were both choosing the same pic

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