Senryu Three

Bonsai Tree

 

There’s nothing myself
Or narrator will not tell
Oh but he told that

© 2011 Michael Yost

http://www.flickr.com/photos/zest-pk/923929855/

Advertisements

16 responses to “Senryu Three

  1. lovely written Senryu,

    Like

  2. That’s what i like in senryu, you only says a few words but the meaning is deep. Your three lines poem says a lot. Good day always

    Like

  3. I liked that a lot. I was wishing I could find words to describe why, but then it occurred to me that part of the pleasure was not being able to pinpoint any particular reason.

    Like

  4. Very cleverly written. Great poem!

    Like

  5. I love this poem. It’s as if you can be willing to say everything but there’s something outside the scope of “everything” that can’t be said. Beautiful.

    Like

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s