Haiku 6

Autumn sun highlights
Darkens peeling painted passion
Button fly shadow

Katherine Forbes Photography

 

© 2011 Michael Yost

Katherine Forbes Photography

One Shoot Sunday

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17 responses to “Haiku 6

  1. I love the line “…peeling painted passion…” Well done!

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  2. button fly shadow…nice…smiles.

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  3. I LOVE this, Michael. ♥

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  4. Delightful image, truly splendidly done in the vividness of this haiku…a passionate telling for the season and the lovers therein.

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  5. Wonderful Haiku
    Judy was Becky’s older sister the senior homecoming queen, valedictorian who dated the quarterback. I still remember the day she said hello to this freshman.

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    • Thanks for the comment. Judy was one year ahead of me and when she started college.. well.. So the stories go, so did our 3 year relationship.. It’s amazing how memories from that far back creep into our consciousness. ..smiles..

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  6. Your haiku response to the photo is just perfect – your poetic eye saw all.

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  7. Like this! 🙂 The illustration is perfect, which makes me ask what came first the pic or the poem. Nice post.

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  8. I love Haiku – this one is really beautiful 😀 xx

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  9. I love it. Especially the last line.

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