Shot down to what end
Manipulated by grammar
Winter blood freeze roads
© 2011 Michael Yost
JINGLE POETRY POTLUCK, WEEK 17
Beautiful haiku *bows*
Yes, to what end. Such senseless violence. Well expressed.
As a poet I felt I had to speak my feelings.
reality stares hard at us each time catastrophe is given a make up by the politicians and the press.. a very good haiku booguloo! here’s my new year potluck- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/03/15/life/
A 9 year old girl.
Sad,sad. Breaks my heart.
Mine as well.
Thanks for your comment.
Very good haiku. Leaves me wondering how cruel life is!
Powerfully written, well done!
powerful imagery. beautifully done response to a horrific event. thanks for stopping by my site as well.
That’s very tight and powerful. A good use of the haiku form!
Yes! And why. So very pointless.
i am aweful with Haiku’s! 😦 i can never get the hang of them. but you most certainly have! happy potluck michael!
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