Haiku 3

Shot down to what endSmoking Gun

Manipulated by grammar

Winter blood freeze roads

© 2011 Michael Yost

http://www.flickr.com/photos/theknowlesgallery/4656786235/

JINGLE POETRY POTLUCK, WEEK 17

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24 responses to “Haiku 3

  1. Beautiful haiku *bows*

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  2. Yes, to what end. Such senseless violence. Well expressed.

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  3. reality stares hard at us each time catastrophe is given a make up by the politicians and the press.. a very good haiku booguloo! here’s my new year potluck- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/03/15/life/

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  4. Sad,sad. Breaks my heart.

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  5. so sad….AWESOME!!!

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  6. Very good haiku. Leaves me wondering how cruel life is!

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  7. wow,
    powerful.

    well done.
    A++

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  8. Powerfully written, well done!

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  9. very interesting.

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  10. powerful imagery. beautifully done response to a horrific event. thanks for stopping by my site as well.

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  11. That’s very tight and powerful. A good use of the haiku form!

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  12. i am aweful with Haiku’s! 😦 i can never get the hang of them. but you most certainly have! happy potluck michael!
    Kellie Elmore

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