Risking Wishes

Posted on August 4, 2011 | 12 Comments

Lovers two cradled crying, infantile desires
Serenading wishes rising through the choirs
Each others expectations, pricked by the briar
Finally recognizing the other was a liar

About these ads

This entry was posted in Poetry and tagged Expectations, Liars, Lust, Risking Wishes. Bookmark the permalink.

12 Responses to Risking Wishes

TheMsLvh | August 4, 2011 at 5:48 pm | Reply

And so the truth was known….you got me with “Finally recognizing the other was a liar”.
Very creative!
- booguloo | August 4, 2011 at 7:05 pm | Reply
  
  After watching family and friends over the years, I was really surprised at all the hidden agendas people pull on one another when the smoke finally cleared on broken relationships.
The Brave | August 5, 2011 at 7:01 am | Reply

Hmmm, really like the flow and rythmn of this. The last line really nails it.
- booguloo | August 5, 2011 at 7:27 am | Reply
  
  I appreciate the visit and comment. Glad you enjoyed it.
antomaniax | August 6, 2011 at 3:54 am | Reply

I just love short poetry..Its awesome!
- booguloo | August 6, 2011 at 7:08 am | Reply
  
  Thanks for the visit and the comments. I love short poetry as well.
Dakshi | August 8, 2011 at 8:11 pm | Reply

You always amazes me, with your creativity.
Lovely….
- booguloo | August 9, 2011 at 6:56 am | Reply
  
  Thanks Dakshi.
Reese S. | August 9, 2011 at 12:04 pm | Reply

LOVE
- booguloo | August 9, 2011 at 1:02 pm | Reply
  
  Could be, but not always.
Fountains | August 18, 2011 at 8:14 am | Reply

Wowzers. This was good. Very unique expressions.
- booguloo | August 18, 2011 at 12:17 pm | Reply
  
  Thanks fountains.