Is it mutual
Do we know
Is it factual
Is it so
Take my hand
And let us go
Up the hills
Down the valleys
Hold on tight
Through dark alleys
Let’s say it mutual
Let us know
Make it factual
Make it so
Take my hand
And let us go
Travel far
Show we know
Embrace the stars
As we grow
© 2011 Michael Yost
That picture fits the image created by your words so well!
Thanks Rach! It was fun.
Absolutely beautiful! Was this posted for Potluck or is it a co- incidence..?
I loved the word flow.. and for once, can I come along with you..? It seems a lot fun..
Hugs xx
Haven’t posted it so it must be a co inky dink. Having some fun and trying to get the nerve.
this is lovely,
your humor is as good as your poetry.
keep it up.
see you at potluck hopefully…
Very Nice! your words flow like a stream ! really liked this!
Good, Let your mare and yourself get a drink! smiles..
holding someone’s hand along the journey is comforting. the poem and photo are perfect fit. love it!
Thanks. Liked your’s as well.
“Travel far
Show we know
Embrace the stars
As we grow”
One of the best journeys to take. Very nice poem.
I like the repetition. Well done.
Thanks for stopping by Katie!
very enjoyable ride in your words.
A++
Glad you liked it.
I eased right through this. The pace was smooth and comfortable. The repetition brought the senses back around and around. like wheels turning on a journey.
Thanks for stopping by my page to comment. I’m slightly nervous about posting my work in such a large and talented community of poets. Your kind words eased a bit of that anxiety.
Thanks K. You keep pushing poems out like you have been you’ll have a subscriber base that won’t quit!
great michael- just great! and thaks for coming by..
Trying for a light one for a change.
Aw, this is sweet–it feels good to have someone to be “mutual” with.
I’m with you mutually! smiles